“and babysat one time two kids, Amy and Jason”
Ég myndi gera nýja setningu:
One time she was babysitting two kids, Amy and Jason

"They were watching tv but then, unsuspected a commercial came and …“
Þetta passar ekki alveg. Veit ekki hvernig er hægt að laga það.

”… into Melissa's car driving to the mall, Melissa was óþreyjufull to get there in time to get a descent wiew“
Þú verður að passa þig að gera setningar styttri, það er auðveldara. Maður á það til að gera þær of langar og flóknar.
into Melissa's car and drove to the mall. Melissa was anxious to get there in time to get a decent view (ef þú tókst ekki eftir því er það v en ekki w, auðvelt að ruglast á því)

”Onfortuntly there were too many and nobody of them saw a clue.“
Unfortunatly held ég að það sé skrifað …
Þetta er pínulítið óskýr setning, en er samt í lagi.

”Mellissa thought to her self she had just blewn her chance too make a good inpresion for Amy and Jason wish had a sad inpresion on their face.“
Melissa thought to herself that she had just blown her chance to make a good impression for Amy and Jason, which had a sad impression on their face.

Ekki gott að nota ”…“ ef maður er að gera eitthvað fyrir skóla.

Best að nota stuttar setningar, þessi síðasta er kannski aðeins of löng og alveg hægt að troða einum punkti inní.

”Melissa could'n helt to run up to her"
Ég fatta ekki alveg hvað þetta þýðir … En það er allavega skrifað couldn't


Það gætu verið einhverjar smá villur í þessu en ég held að ég sé með stafsetningu rétt. Ég er mjög smámunasöm svo sumt af þessu skiptir kannski ekki máli. Þú ert samt með nokkuð góðan orðaforða en nærð ekki alveg að nota hann (kannast við það :S) Gangi þér vel :)

Þetta er nú meiranið. Mér leiddist svo ég lagfærði allan textann. Það er alls ekkert ólíklegt að það leynist samt sem áður villur í þessu enda nenni ég ekki að fara yfir þetta aftur. Góðar stundir.

Melissa was a babysitter and one time she was babysitting two kids, Amy and Jason. They were watching TV when suddenly it went to commercial. It said that the popstar, Kelly Clarksson, was introducing her new album at the mall at two o'clock today. Melissa pointed at the TV and said they'd better hurry or else they would miss it. They all ran out of the door and into Melissa's car and drove to the mall, Melissa was anxious to get there in time to get a decent wiew. Unfortunatley there were too many people and none of them saw a thing. Mellissa thought to herself that she had just blown her chance to make a good impression. Amy and Jason had a sad look on their faces. When they were going to the car at the parking lot they saw Kelly walking towards her limousine. All of a sudden she stopped to look for something in her bag and Melissa used the opportunity to ask for an autograph for Amy and Jason. Kelly gladly gave it to them.

Var verið að semja texta við myndasöguna á illræmda prófinu í ensku 2004?

Melissa was a babysitter. One time she was babysitting two kids, Amy and Jason. They were watching TV when suddenly it went to commercial break. It said that the popstar Kelly Clarkson was promoting her new album at the mall at two o'clock today. Melissa pointed at the TV and said they'd better hurry or else they would miss it. They all ran out of the door and into Melissa's car and drove to the mall, Melissa was anxious to get there in time to get a decent view. Unfortunately, there were too many people for any of them to see a thing. Amy and Jason had a sad look on their faces. Melissa thought to herself she had just blown her chance to make a good impression. When they were walking back to the car they saw Kelly walking towards her limousine. All of a sudden she stopped to look for something in her bag and Melissa used the opportunity to ask for an autograph for Amy and Jason. Kelly gladly gave it to them.