I was standing in the open
Looking straight ahead
At something that seemed so still
Something that was about to attack

I shouted for help as desperatly sad
I shouted for help so loud,
I was getting mad
as I[only] heard my own sound.

I didn’t have time to think
-it didn´t let me blink-
I started running away
It was getting closer
It was faster than me
-o please let me be-

I shouted for help
I shouted so loud
But no one was there
No one was there.. to help

Something pushed me to the ground
It felt so heavy, I couldn’t breathe.
I couldn’t move.. I was crushed like I leafe
Desperatly I shouted, help me – please o, let me be-
My dream was fading away in the day…

I woke up in his bed
I didn’t know where we had met.
He lay still beside me
Covered in blood
I was holding a knife
I had taken a life.

I shouted for help
I shouted so loud
But no one was there
No one was there.. to help

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Fyrst ég kunni svo vel að gagnrýna þá hélt ég að það væri betra að vera til gagns e-h. Mér finnst hugmyndin hjá þér snilld, mér fanst samt sem áður virkilega vanta smá rím- það einhvern vegin grípur man.

En það er frábært að þú getur sungið á sama stígi og Björk eða Evanescence( sem ég þurfti að gera copy-paste því ég gat ekki skrifað:D), þær eru mjög góðar söngkonur.