Jamm og jæja…þetta er nú með því fyrsta sem ég hef samið, og er því án efa frekar lélegt…en ef einhverjir hafa áhuga þá er þetta textinn við lagið Beating around the Bush með Ulterior Motives á http://www.rokk.is (því miður er enginn texti á þessum file…reyni að redda því sem fyrst)

Endilega segjið álit ykkar, gott sem slæmt…og kommentið á hvað mætti betur fara.

Beating around the Bush
Waiting for George to down/In the second round
That's what this rhyme's all about,
and life is all about the give'n take/
and you take and take/
and people's hearts break/
for goodness sake/
can't you see I won't take/it no more,I'm gonna make/you
stop
what you're doing to the world!
No longer do little kids live in the existence/
of innocence/

You make me sick/
you fucking prick/
someone should cut of your dick/
and make you swallow it/
I hope you choke on that last hairy bit/

Someone is bound/to come around/
and sound/the alarm/
when they see you're the one causing global harm/
you ain't got no goddamn charm/
all you got is a rich daddy/
who paid hos son outta the army/
cuz he was a junky/
who just could not see/
that he was supposed to grow up to be/
more than just a big baby/

but it didn't happen/and now I be rappin'/
'bout the fuckin' presiden'/

and I ain't

Beating around the Bush
Waiting for George to down/In the second round
That's what this rhyme's all about,
and life is all about the give'n take/
and you take and take/
and people's hearts break/
for goodness sake/
can't you see I won't take/it no more,I'm gonna make/you
stop
what you're doing to the world!
No longer do little kids live in the existence/
of innocence/


Þakka fyrir mig…veit að það hefði mátt vera meira innihald í textanum, en er samt nokkuð sáttur við þetta…
…meðan ég man…vantar ekki einhvern trommara í hiphop band?eða rappara???